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So, guys, my friend is writing a nook and this is the first chapter please critique it she need support :)

As fatal as beautiful as life

I couldn't bare to think about it anymore, I miss him and I can't stand not hearing him call.

We were starting a new page, moving to a new house, starting a new life and I'm devastated. My name is Arelena and I'm 15 years old. I live with my mom dad and baby brother Cody. We're moving here because of last summer my older brother Dacen was out with some friends spending the weekend away. When he was on his way home he went missing. No one knows who or what happened to him just found his jacket.My mom and dad couldn't take it anymore all the questions so they moved us out here in the middle of nowhere with a massive house and lots of land. the only bad is, is that it's only 30 minutes walk to the forest where dacen went missing. We still have houses around us just not so close about 5-minute walk so it's okay I guess and we are still surrounded by forest which is beautiful. I had a whole 2 days before school so I wasn't going to think about it too much. "We're here" gasped Cody with his nose pressed up against the car window as he used to do when he was five and he was ten now. The house was actually huge my mom bought it with the money my mom had saved for 20 years it was about 18, million she was going to use it to go on a holiday in a 5-star hotel with a pool and basically live a dream for 1 year but this was just as good. It was a six bedroom house so I was happy. It has a lake and a massive garden full of flowers and vines rapped around borders it was truly amazing. A tall beautiful brown haired woman stepped out of the house. She had a perfect body and well she was just perfect I'm jealous already "Hello, my name is Cordelia I'm going to show you around and settle you in. Well let's go" she spoke very fluent English and smiled as she walked us up to the house " wow !" Said mom with the expression of excitement and amazement " it's beautiful " I couldn't not say it, I could tell I was going to have a new life here and everything was going to change.

We settled in fast I had the biggest room apart from the main of course but it was still gorgeous. I set my room up like before in the old house I needed something from the life I've left I am going to miss my friends, my freedom and the city now it's a 1-hour walk and a 15-minute drive to get to school. I guess I'll just have to get used to this. As I set my room out with pictures and memories I came across one of me and dacen .we were about 6 and 11 on a beach .
We were sitting down and dacen had his arms wrapped around me and we were laughing. I didn't realise when a tear slid from my cheek and I put the picture down and turned to see Cody at the door and he also had a tear running down his cheeks " I miss him " he said whilst walking over to sit on my bed "I know" I said softly rubbing his shoulders as he lent into me.

"Dinners ready " shouted mom from the bottom of the stairs "coming " I shouted almost a second after. Dinner was a silent event, obviously, everyone was missing home but we'll survive I'm sure. After dinner all we did was un pack, it was a very pretty house. Everything was in the right place, there was loads of space and freedom to wonder, it was amazing. I just wish dacen was here.

Sleep that night was hard, there were noises which I was not used to at all but I could still hear my dad snore and my mom groans loudly but that wasn't the worst part. It was outside the way the wind whispers and the sound of the trees where mystical.
I was probably being dumb. The one I'm surrounded by forest and animals and two the wind is just harsh tonight that's all. But sleep did not come at all. I turned to get my phone to see the time when something black flashed across the grass. It looked like a dog but we don't get wolves here and that's what that would be it's to big to be a house dog. Strange...

I finally fell asleep about 1.30 am and I woke up about an hour later and at the bottom of my bed was the huge wolf I saw earlier run across the grass, it was jet black with the familiar blues eyes and I didn't know how it was familiar but they were. It crossed the room staring at me as if it had never seen a human before ,it started getting closer and closer , still staring dead straight at me and with no warning he leaped at me with blinding speed and got so close I could feel the warmth of its breath and hear the sound of it breathing , it wasn't right for a wolf to have blue eyes but his held warmth and a comforting look and ...

I jolted up out of my bed that threw me on the floor with a loud crash, as my head harshly hit the floor. But the room was empty, there was no disposal of any wolf coming to a step in the room. I must have been imagining it. " Arelena !" I heard my mom call a second before my bedroom door swung open and my mom red-faced rushed in , closely followed by my brother and dad " what happened, are you alright ?" My mum sounded so frantic it was actually quite amusing " I'm fine, mum I fell out of bed" I said softly rolling my eyes "no one got hurt " she had been like this ever since my brother went missing. " okay we should go back to bed now " dad said almost sounding desperate. "Night, " I said quietly as the turned and walked away from all drowsy. When I thought of the wolf in my dreams I realized that the black hair and blue eyes where to familiar to be a coincidence but it was only a dream.

That night I dreamt about dacen his laugh the way it would echo through the corridors and his face when he was amused with someone or the way he rolled his blue eyes and smiled a second after. He used to watch me all the time waiting for me to do something hilarious. He wasn't very good at containing himself when laughing or just smiling. I loved the way his hair made his eyes stand out I mean I have blue eyes like his and blonde hair like my mother. Cody did not have blue eyes he had green like my mom but hazel colored hair like my father. Dacen had my grandfathers hair, jet black.

I woke early the next morning excited to get to see around "can I go out, please?" I asked after eating a bowl of cereal " not where your brother went missing " mom said with a worried look "of course" I said rolling my eyes and grabbing a bag of things like plasters just in case and shoving it in my rucksack with water and some food. When I left the house I went right, the opposite direction to my brother's last location. I kept walking till I came to a river.It was stunning every thing was an amazing sight, the waterfalls shined blue and glittery and the emerald grass edged neatly near the waterfall and the flowers beautifully swaying in the light breeze. I couldn't believe how mythical this place looked .it was like a fairy tale.

Suddenly I saw it, standing their watching me was the massive black wolf with blue eyes I had seen in my dreams. It stared at me with a confused look on his face. It was strange how much it reminded me of something. The wolf was perched on a high rock next to the waterfall. He started to walk up to me and I immediately froze where I stood and he sat in front of me staring and only when he leaned in closer did I jump back and fall flat on my back. I did not know what to do as he started approaching but my senses took over and I got to my feet and ran back into the trees. With my heart pounding and my pulse racing, I came to a stop where I thought I lost him.

But I guess I was just wishful thinking. He was in front of me again. He looked as if he where about to laugh. I have never seen a wolf laugh so I guess that would be something. But he just sat their staring as if he was waiting for me to do something stupid. I stared at him for a long time and soon I couldn't take it anymore. "So.... I'm going to go....." I said longing out my words in and awkward sort of way , and I turned to walk away when I heard a Hurd of men shouting and before I knew it I was swept of my feet and ferociously thrown on the wolfs back and I heard a voice over my shoulder "hold on" it was definitely not the wolf it came from way behind me and it was shouting.I took the persons advice held in the wolves fur and he started to run. Everything around me turntables into a blurry picture and I couldn't see anything clearly. It bust have been faster than a car at least going at 150 miles per hour if not more. I couldn't take the wind on my face so I hid behind the wolfs head and stayed their. We finally reached to a stop and when I looked up it was a small cave. It was built like a hole but it could fit both of us nicely but he pushed me in and gave me a stern look as if telling me not to move. He looked into my eyes before running away. Their was something wrong and I didn't like it. I heard loads of fast foot steps, running the way the wolf did. I waited what seemed an hour. I got to my feet and pushed myself out the hole and started slowly walking home, not that I knew the way.
I heard a high pitched whine cone from behind me and I spun around. "It's the wolf, " I said frantically and before I thought what I was doing I was running. With no sense of direction, I was running where I thought the wolf was howling from. When I saw what they where doing to him my stomach turned and I felt the strong urge to run and stop then.

The humans had attacked the wolf with chains pulling him down and restraining him. Also, they are wiping him with leather and what made him howl was when they would stab him in the leg and laugh. This was torture to not held him and I couldn't take it. I ran towards him, nearly tripping over anything that had a round surface. I reached the bottom of the hill And ran as fast as I could, not thinking of what I was going to do. I saw a knife lying on the ground an I grabbed it. I threw it as hard as I could and it hit the mans backpack. Everything slipped out and they all span to look at me "this is wrong . How dare you hurt an animal, leave him alone. He's done nothing wrong " I screamed at the top of my lungs "are you sure about that ?" Said the tallest and biggest man " this is torture and it's wrong " I said surprised by the carelessness in his voice" look, you should not be here. Go home " he said trying to reason with me "no!" I snapped stubbornly " I will not hesitate to shot you if you don't leave " he threatened to grit his teeth. At this the wolf went crazy , starting to snap at the people and the man ran over trying to restrain him again, but this time the wolf scratched his face and ran towards me dragging at least ten men who had been holding him in chains. Once he reached me I pulled the ring that held the chains of his head and pulled him away. It was no use he was a thousand times stronger than me , I just held on as he once again thews me on his back and began to run.










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